piatok 3. októbra 2008

Say me...





Who am I for you,
 say me!
What I mean
for you ?
What you want
 to take ,
what you want
to give?
Say me it!

You discovered
one day suddenly,
posting messages
each days...
I heard your quiet voice
 from the distance,
while the wind has brought
 me your still laugh...

The talk with you
about whatever,
seems for me like
the whisper of stars
all this wonderful words
dreams and promises
in our hearts are
deeply signed up.

We all are the parts
of the entirety.
Nearer are we to each other
from day to day
In all what we see ,
we perceive,
are the two souls
joined in one.




Povedz mi!

Čím pre teba
som ja?
Povedz!
Čo znamenám
ja pre teba?
Čo chceš si vziať,
čo chceš mi dať???

Zjavil si sa zrazu
znenazdania,
posielal správy
každý deň,
pokojný hlas tvoj
prichádzal z diale,
vietor prinášal
tichý tvoj smiech.

Hovory spoločné
o čomkoľvek,
zdajú sa byť sťa
ševelenie hviezd.
Všetke krásne slová,
sny a prísľuby,
hlboko v srdciach
našich uložené sú.

Všetci sme časťou
jedného celku.
Bližšie sme ku sebe
zo dňa na deň viac.
Vo všetkom čo dá sa
vidieť, vnímať,
sú naše duše dve
v jednú spojené.


3 komentáre:

  1. Thank you much dear Virginia, I'm so happy you're here again. I hope that under your thoughtful sight I will avoid of doing big mistakes....Just tomorrow will be a year I began to work on 360Yahoo and here on
    Multiply I had began I think on the end of October last year.
    I appreciative here on Multiply that here I can use "Spell Checking". But as for going about if I choose the right words , right structure of the words or correct order of sentences here this Spell Checker cannot me help.Here help only much read another writing, poetry , books to can absorb the english rules:)
    I wish you wonderful sunny Autumn day:)

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  2. Thank you, Maria. You're right. You learn sentence structure by seeing how others do it. Keep reading.

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